lotto is a not o

[poetrychatbore]

lotto is a not o 10.10.15

 

 

you had a formula

it was like a hidden code

the risk is loosing all familiar

because change is the panic mode.

i see the idea

giving us more chance

the 2 numbers is a javelin sphere

will this encourage more to get up and dance.

1 in 14 million were the odds

your chance has now fallen

who exactly gave these changes the nods

are there pockets with money swollen.

i must admit its clever marketing

a total psychological baffle

but to the retarded gambler you are targeting

yes i am criticizing the pathetic new raffle.

2 numbers now wins a bonus

so you are not bleeding

trot back to the shop as on you is the onus

a gambling addiction you are feeding.

will my poem to lotto slaughter

or the bad publicity cause spillage

i have made a decision with no alter

i condemn lotto from the box in the best ever highgate village.

[kaosmark2]

There once was a poetrychatbore

Whose threads grew more upon more

They had many a crime

Including failing to rhyme

The poetry drove me to snore.

[feral chile]

harsh

[russycarps]

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme. The flow of a poem is far more important.

Forcing rhyme is clunky and shows a lack of maturity.

This fellows poems flow about as freely as a river of shit.

[kaosmark2]

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme. The flow of a poem is far more important.

Forcing rhyme is clunky and shows a lack of maturity.

This fellows poems flow about as freely as a river of shit.

I agree.

 

But it felt like an easy way to mock.

[russycarps]

I agree.

But it felt like an easy way to mock.

I was talking about his/her poems not yours!

Yours was far more pleasant to read.

Hopefully they will take on board constructive criticism.

[harderfaster]

That was a bit of a struggle to read.

 

I think there are far worse ways to feed a gambling addiction than by encouraging people to play the lottery. £2 a week isn't doing many much harm... 

 

These gaming machines in betting shops are the real killers.

[kaosmark2]

I was talking about his/her poems not yours!

Yours was far more pleasant to read.

Hopefully they will take on board constructive criticism.

Oh yeah I got that, it's just I'd mocked the lack of rhyming, which I don't actually believe is essential to poetry.

[Yoghurt on a Stick]

That was a bit of a struggle to read.

 

I think there are far worse ways to feed a gambling addiction than by encouraging people to play the lottery. £2 a week isn't doing many much harm... 

 

These gaming machines in betting shops are the real killers.

 

I agree, on all the points you make.

 

I used to be hooked on gaming machines in pubs in my youth. So, so glad I overcame that one - eventually.

[Yoghurt on a Stick]

lotto is a not o 10.10.15

 

 

you had a formula

it was like a hidden code

the risk is loosing all familiar

because change is the panic mode.

i see the idea

giving us more chance

the 2 numbers is a javelin sphere

will this encourage more to get up and dance.

1 in 14 million were the odds

your chance has now fallen

who exactly gave these changes the nods

are there pockets with money swollen.

i must admit its clever marketing

a total psychological baffle

but to the retarded gambler you are targeting

yes i am criticizing the pathetic new raffle.

2 numbers now wins a bonus

so you are not bleeding

trot back to the shop as on you is the onus

a gambling addiction you are feeding.

will my poem to lotto slaughter

or the bad publicity cause spillage

i have made a decision with no alter

i condemn lotto from the box in the best ever highgate village.

 

Just wondering if you've ever been diagnosed as having OCD?

[poetrychatbore]

and a lot more.

[Yoghurt on a Stick]

You are too cunning to be understood.